Where am I?
I am still with you.
I live in the moment - now.
In my own story.
Look at me. Touch me. Love me.
I dance to my own music.
These Haikus are harder than they look! How did I do????? Let me know below :)
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Comment by JordanB on April 6, 2011 at 12:05pm -
This was an excellent post. I haven't written a shimo-no-ku before but I know from experience that Haikus are easy to write but difficult to say anything with. I think you've managed to say something here.
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Comment by Carol on April 6, 2011 at 12:42pm -
usually they include one reference to a season. Thus perhaps withered leaf, snow footprints...and a contrast, thus (I didn't write it). In 5-7-5 syllables, the poem would cover a lot of territory.
Sick and feverish
Glimpse of cherry blossoms
Still shivering.
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Comment by Alicia C. Staley on April 6, 2011 at 8:08pm -
400 posts??? Amazing work Ellen! You are still he sharing an incredible amount of information - please keep up the great work. Alicia
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